The Pain Of My Love For You

Posted by Nsoromma...Child of the Heavens

I have walked to the ends of the earth

For you.

I have run marathons

And climbed mountains.

I swam oceans,

'Til my arms ached.

I can't catch my breath

My knuckles bleed

And my feet are blistered.

My eyes swim with tears

But always

I will push on

To be with you.

Category: poetry, relationships, sadness

8 opinionated people have something to say:

Myne said...: Nice one...; 15 November 2009 at 03:39
Juanita said...: Emotional and I like it!; 15 November 2009 at 07:58
Shels said...: dats deep.
hope this person's work pays off.; 15 November 2009 at 13:40
Nsoromma...Child of the Heavens said...: Thanx ladies xXx

@ Shels - So do I!; 15 November 2009 at 21:32
The Author said...: The mix of tenses suggested a rawness of emotion and sincerity which worked wonders for this very simple poem.; 16 November 2009 at 19:56
Nsoromma...Child of the Heavens said...: This comment has been removed by the author.; 17 November 2009 at 09:56
Nsoromma...Child of the Heavens said...: Coming from the poem maestro I'll take that as a big fat compliment!

Thabk u Nana Yaw; 17 November 2009 at 09:59
Anonymous said...: Great poem. I could feel how deep the love is in it.; 4 December 2009 at 06:47

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