The Pain Of My Love For You

I have walked to the ends of the earth

For you.
I have run marathons
And climbed mountains.
I swam oceans,
'Til my arms ached.
I can't catch my breath
My knuckles bleed
And my feet are blistered.
My eyes swim with tears
But always
I will push on
To be with you.


8 opinionated people have something to say:

Myne Whitman said...

Nice one...

Nita said...

Emotional and I like it!

Shels said...

dats deep.
hope this person's work pays off.

Nsoromma...Child of the Heavens said...

Thanx ladies xXx

@ Shels - So do I!

Nana Yaw Asiedu said...

The mix of tenses suggested a rawness of emotion and sincerity which worked wonders for this very simple poem.

Nsoromma...Child of the Heavens said...
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Nsoromma...Child of the Heavens said...

Coming from the poem maestro I'll take that as a big fat compliment!

Thabk u Nana Yaw

Anonymous said...

Great poem. I could feel how deep the love is in it.

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